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This is a magnificent story will there be a new chapter?

Very good story. Got sad also when he erased sissy's memory.

Regarding Chapter 120, you are very welcome, and thank you for your invitation to me to provide my input to your story. I look forward to incorporating this cameo into a future story of my own. Someday!

Cool! I love how you show how Mary and Jillian have different views of the same situation. Keep it going!

This may be one of the best story's I have ever read. The twists and turns not only kept me on the edge of my seat the entire time but always wanting to read more. I read Johnny and the limit and I get where you were coming from but Vic elors story does yours no justice. I like his but you really outdid yourself here with an amazing piece of literature. This is the type of story that could be made into a movie and would be a cult classic in my opinion. I honestly hope you pick this one back up because it has such potential to keep going and I don't think any person could write it the right way but you. This was a story with a plot that was given much thought and I say amazing job.

Really enjoy this story. Keep them coming

Great story. You must write more.

in chapter 11 IT IS SUZAN going psyco not marry

Okay, latest chapter needs more exposition on how they got to the point where Mary died and Vegadon apparently had something bad happen to it. The story was good until then but then it seemed to get a little..... broken, like something was missing.

I hope the girls will stay with Jonny and go back with him to that alien world as royal harem girls. I know Jillian offered something like that before she changed history.