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for Incest Diaries

by SubjectEnergy18

person jay
schedule March 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I would love it if you could add more chapters, because out of all the zuko/azula fabric on this site this is the best!
person JNVRedCat
schedule March 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. Please come back and continue this
schedule June 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
when is the next chapter coming T_T
person Anon
schedule March 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I think you should keep Ursa out of the action and have her play a similar role to Ozai's in the first chapter: uninvolved comic relief. Like another reviewer said, you maintained the Avatar-type humor by making him so disengaged that he didn't even realize what was going on. Since Ursa walked in on them and knows what they're doing, she could be used for humor like Sokka, Katara, and Suki were. Just because they're in the story doesn't mean they're having sex with Zuko and Azula, but they add to it in their own way. I feel Ursa would be best used in this way, too. Stick with Jin. :)
person Ryvius
schedule March 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Has been an entertaining read so far.

Would like to see more of Zuko/Azula/Jin and yes, Ursa would be an awesome addition.

I personally like Mai, so it sucks she's out, but could we get Ty Lee on the action as well?

Keep up the good work!
schedule March 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting fic so far. I can't wait to read more.
schedule January 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really like how the story is going
hope to see the next chapter soon

also like to see jin, azula, and zuko in a threesome
as well as a scene with Toph and/or ty lee
schedule January 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i also agree with Lunaroki
take it a little slower and add more details
person log
schedule December 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this was so gooooooood. please update soon!
person log
schedule September 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
please update soon! this was awesome!