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Great story, I would love it if you could add more chapters, because out of all the zuko/azula fabric on this site this is the best!

This is really good. Please come back and continue this

when is the next chapter coming T_T

I think you should keep Ursa out of the action and have her play a similar role to Ozai's in the first chapter: uninvolved comic relief. Like another reviewer said, you maintained the Avatar-type humor by making him so disengaged that he didn't even realize what was going on. Since Ursa walked in on them and knows what they're doing, she could be used for humor like Sokka, Katara, and Suki were. Just because they're in the story doesn't mean they're having sex with Zuko and Azula, but they add to it in their own way. I feel Ursa would be best used in this way, too. Stick with Jin. :)

Has been an entertaining read so far.

Would like to see more of Zuko/Azula/Jin and yes, Ursa would be an awesome addition.

I personally like Mai, so it sucks she's out, but could we get Ty Lee on the action as well?

Keep up the good work!

This is an interesting fic so far. I can't wait to read more.

I really like how the story is going
hope to see the next chapter soon

also like to see jin, azula, and zuko in a threesome
as well as a scene with Toph and/or ty lee

i also agree with Lunaroki
take it a little slower and add more details

this was so gooooooood. please update soon!

please update soon! this was awesome!