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June 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Damn. I really wish I could say something besides damn, but DAMN. That was hot. There's no other word for it. I LOVED the way you wrote the kiss scene, it was perfect, and cut off at the frustratingly perfect time. I don't know if you're comfortable writing smut, but if you are, I would love to watch them up the ante. Though I'm not sure what Fenten's problem is. Like he said, it's not like they haven't masturbated before, right? Eh, whatever. Perfect story, fun writing, hot make-outs... this fic has it all.
Now if only I could get myself to STOP COMING BACK AND READING THE EXACT SAME FIC FOR LIKE THREE DAYS NOW.
Now if only I could get myself to STOP COMING BACK AND READING THE EXACT SAME FIC FOR LIKE THREE DAYS NOW.
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May 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
please please PLEASE continue this! i love it!
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December 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This definitely needs a sequel. Hell, I definitely need a sequel! Hottest stuff I've read. The characters might overreact a little, when you think of it logically, but that's what makes it so hot. Nothing wrong with it.