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for Eternal Love

by harathor

schedule July 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG I loved this. The drama, and desception and Sokka dying, I loved it, more please.
schedule March 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
hi it's me again thank you for the shout out and I'm so sorry that my review got deleted I try to fix it but when I went back to look at it was gone I think I accidentally deleted it so thank you again for the shout out and I hope you continue writing I really like your story.
person AidaLily
schedule March 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for finishing it. It was adorable and very cute. Great story!
person AidaLily
schedule March 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well I just stayed up until three in the morning to read your entire story from start to finish. I can't wait until you update it. I want to read the look on Zuko's face if Sokka is indeed pregnant like I have the sneaking suspicion he is. I can't stand Mai's father. I love that Mai is trying to help them be together and Katara is rather annoying. All in all, I love the story and can't wait to read its conclusion. :)
schedule March 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Brownies are in the oven. :D Loved the chapters. However you left me screaming "Noooooo, come back Sokka!!!!" I pray Mai's father opens that damned letter and just keels over. How dare he insult Sokka with his high and mighty attitude. Too bad it wasn't raining, he'd probably drown with his nose stuck so high in the air. Bastard.
Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
schedule March 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please, please update soon. There will be a pan of freshly baked brownies in it if you do. ;) ( I have a love, hate relationship with cliff hangers. ;) Thank you for updating (even though it was short and a CLIFFIE), I'm on pins and needles waiting for the next chapter (and it's all your fault.) ;D
schedule March 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story and I think you should definitely do mpreg
person Dragon7
schedule March 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
person madamdragon
schedule October 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You are soo going to hafta update this. I need to know what his plan is and if they live happily ever after.