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person laloga13
schedule May 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love this idea! I can't wait to see how it's played out in the various ways...

Fantastic notion to have Ahsoka be the slaver and Obi the "bait," so to speak. I loved how he was determined to do pretty much anything to see a mission be successful, even at the cost of his pride. Ahsoka and Anakin's banter was priceless, and I loved the hint of Rexsoka thrown in for good measure - we'll have to see Rexter in that getup one day. ;)

I'm enjoying this a great deal, and am most *definitely* looking forward to the naughty bits. :)
schedule May 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Obi Wan Kenobi as a Zygerrian slave? A shaved buff blonde Zygerrian slave? You are my idol, Jade. Seriously. I could read your writings all day. I think my favorite part were the reactions of all the other characters as they were assessing Obi Wan's new attire. Rex had the most conservative reaction, of all. Of course, I couldn't get my mind thinking past "Rex in slave attire. Mmmmmm..... I'll rescue him. I will..." After that, it was all just a blur, and I'm afraid I got terribly distracted. But anyway, love the concept of this whole story, and it's a delightful twist on everything that happened in Zygerria. Can't go wrong with this one. Somehow when you shave Obi Wan, he loves to be about 15 again. The Queen is going to have some fun, I think, (and so are we.)