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schedule May 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow not too often you see a girl peeping on a guy and touching herself. Love this deleted scene.
schedule May 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow short and sweet, well shorter. Kudos to Aang on his air bending flash!
schedule April 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see you back at it always enjoy the eclectic sexual preferences that you seem to give the characters. Keeps things interesting and makes it a good read. Gotta say that dream was a definite prime example of that. Can't wait to see what you do when Toph joins the group.
schedule January 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Man sucks for Jet that he didn't get a chance at another time. And I know that a teenage boy can't be responsible for what his body does but that is your sister. At least try for some romance. Great job on both chapters loved the Jet one good thing it wasn't a dream though I at least thought he would have gotten a handy j.
schedule September 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Geez who's gonna be the next victim of the fondle monster known as Zuko? I mean first Aang then Katara, those hormones are leaving no captive safe from those idle hands of his. Enjoyed this one even though uncle Iroh ruined the moment. Can't wait for the next one.
schedule July 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nice I gotta say if I was in Aang's position I would have definitely done the same thing I mean how often do you get the object of your desire as spank material to sit right there for you.
schedule June 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awesome job on that one loved how you got momo involved. Oh and nice use of nuts.
schedule June 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, Not bad. Quite a fantasy Kaatara has. And who knew Haru was so well built. Another nice chapter cut from the show.
person MistressCat
schedule June 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This was a fun story. You did a pretty good Job. I think I kind of like the script format it is very different. I also think this is somewhat realistic. I can see Aang,being a normal 11-14 year old having to deal with awkward erections. I like how he doesn't freak out. He just deals with it. And I loved king Bumi. I can see the mad king doing that to test loyalty... And to see breasts. Over all good work.
person Harry
schedule June 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting concept