AFF Fiction Portal
person Nathan Wilkes
schedule November 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I gotta say that bit of foreshadowing there has me looking forward to the coming chapters.
person Carolina
schedule October 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Keep them coming I love it
schedule August 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow how very Azula that was a pretty "hot scene". Haha, do you get it? Cause she's a fire bender. That was funnier in my head. So anywho great job really can't wait to see what you got planned next. Especially with May.
schedule August 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Very nice gotta say didn't expect that one for a while yet. I kind of figured for some lights out make out and groping before the crystals lit up, or maybe Soka getting a little action from the hippie chicks to "mellow his aura". Not complaining and it does open the door for some later awkwardness between them. Great job can't wait to see how the Ba Sing Sei thing plays out, or the stuff with Toft! Oh man that is gonna be crazy.
person Ashlan
schedule August 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyed reading, not a fan of the M/M stuff but felt the writing flowed nicely. I haven't read it all yet but am looking forward to the rest.
schedule August 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was intense, gotta say if it had made into the show that's exactly how I would imagine it happening. Bravo sir, bravo.
schedule August 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit dude. I guess the fondle monsters blood runs through both of their veins. Shot in the dark, but has Azula been daddy's naughty little girl? Anyway another good one my friend can't wait for the next installment.
schedule July 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Now that one was extremely hot. I will take some more of that please. There is just something about that whole shy/innocent sexual exploration thing that too sexy! Great job on this chapter.
schedule July 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see Uncle Iroh getting his the guy deserves it.
person Anon
schedule June 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to read the later chapters