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Read chapter 13, glad to see you've not given up.

I'm pleased by your writing quality still being intact and I'm fully aware of the concept of writers block.

Glad I am helping by letting you know I'm here and waiting.

please still be writing the story i gave it praise upon praises and the visions in my minds eye are vivid and would break my heart should they never come to the end of this epic tale

Oh, man...I just found this story today and read all the way through. I'm not much of a fan of grimdark/war fics, but this one is really good. This story has literally left my stomach in knots, just wondering what's going to happen next keeps me reading. That's the mark of a truly well written story! Just a few forgivable grammar mistakes, and it would have been better if you gave each character dialogue its own separate line, but those are paltry complaints compared to the praise I have for this. Please, please, please! Post the next chapter soon! I can't take these feels for much longer, I need closure!

Chapter 12 review.

Again, such a thrilling chapter!

Characterization is spot on and keeps me immersed.

Aside from a few minor spelling/grammar errors, you are doing great!

great work partner another amazing chapter,your chapters are always worth the wait because they are always very good.looking forward to the next chapter its going to be very exiting, can't wait to see when twilight will recover. keep up the great work sugarcube.

Just read chapter 11 and thank you for the shout out!

I am VERY pleased with how it's progressing, grammar and spelling is more fine tuned and is just a very enthralling story.

Further proof that a story need not "smut" to keep it's audience entertained.

it's good to hear from you partner its been awhile great work on another awesome chapter sugarcube, when ya'll get a bad case of writers block it's best to take a break and relax before you continue. Anyway great work again partner keep up the great work sugarcube can't wait for another amazing chapter.

Yay! I'm glad to see a new chapter to this incredible story. This chapter was awesome too. Sadly that's all I can really say, and looking forward to the next chapter.
By the by. Do you also post on Equestria Daily, or FIMFiction? Might be a good place to go if you want more readers.

This was done fantastically and I find myself in a hurry to read each chapter. You capture the personalities wonderfully.

I kinda stumbled upon this story during a 'search' and I find it very interesting, a page turner, if it had pages. I came in around chapter 8 and have enjoyed each new one as it was put up. I sincerely hope you finish it. So many good stories seem to just sit there after a while. I know it's not easy to write stories, I've tried myself and I usually wind up with a jigsaw puzzle, pieces here and there. But I keep trying. I hope you will too.