rate_review Reviews

This was very well done and I have to say...got me a little hot under the collar. It was beautiful, showing the sexual tension between the two. Your writing was brilliant, the flow never once faltered and the two blended (excuse the pun) together quite well.

This is precisely the Rexsoka porn I was looking for! Sweet and hot and wonderfully in-character. THanks so much for putting so much effort into the details. It was a joy to read.

I love this twin set of stories. I love Rex's control and his indulgence. I love Ahsoka's aggression and lack of guile.

They complete each other as much as any other pairing in SW. They understand each other, respect each other, and need each other.

I have been wondering if you see Ahsoka's sex drive as much more instictual once she gets started? She almost seems unconscious of her actions until she's satisfied. Then she becomes a thinking sentient again.

Harem Girl II: i noticed you used 'flush' a lot in this. an icorrect use of "They'll" i do believe you meant There'll. other than grammer mistakes it was an awesome little story

Whew! [fans self]

Ahem. Absolutely loved this! It was the perfect mix of wild passion and gentle exploration, and fit this couple so well. After the first installment, it's clear that they both are passionate for each other, but some time has passed and Rex - with his natural proclivity towards overthinking - has decided to try and stem the tide of his attraction to Ahsoka.

Lucky for all of us, he can't resist her. :D

Loved how they took cues from each other, which showcases just how well they know one another. Even in his desire to be with her, I loved how Rex wanted to *savor* every moment of the experience, and make sure that she did so as well. His urge to taste her, and his subsequent actions were amazing - perfectly detailed and tastefully (no pun intended, I swear!) portrayed.

But my favorite line, perhaps my all-time favorite Rexquote from you, was this: "You," he told her with a shaky smile, "are going to kill me."

I can't express how much I loved that! It made me laugh and saw "awww" and "hot-damn!" all at once.

[applauds] This will be read again and again! :D

So hot, and the tension is exquisite. I love the way she draws it out, slowly but perfectly catching his attention at last in a way he can't ignore. When he says 'No.' ...I just love it. So simple, but undeniable, I can't resist a little male possessiveness. I loved the writing here too, it was all so good, tense to build up the scene and it flowed so well. Awesome ;-D

Ack! OK, took me like 25 minutes to finally create a login to AFF just so I could review your story. (Some kind of weird technical glitch that required me to keep resetting my password.) But, hey! I liked your story so much that I was determined to get logged in to the kriffin' site if it killed me.)

So, let me say, first off, I thought how it was insanely clever how you posted a version of this on the "Captain and the Commander." And, then posted this version here. The two fit into each other so beautifully, and it was a delight to read them one after another. It was like having the inside scoop on some really sweet secret.

Second, the way the story slowly builds is so absolutely delicious. The tension in this is absolutely incredible. The way you write it makes the reader want to burst out of their skin as much as Rex and Ahsoka.

"Change."

So, Rex. Such a perfect line for him. He is trying so hard to be good here.

And, the point at which he snaps and you bring in the Mando'a is probably one of the best moments I have ever read in one of these stories. Probably the coolest use of Mando'a I've seen. And, I have no idea what "Nu draar" even means. And, I don't even care. It's just so perfect in the moment because Rex is absolutely snapping, and the fact that he is reverting to Mando'a is like testerone times ten. Incredible smexy.

And, then she bites him? Aargh.

"You are not wearing that for anyone else."

Love his possessiveness here. That jealous streak that tells you Rex has wanted Ahsoka for a long time, and wants no one else to possess her. "No one else." Love it. "Nobody!" Again, this moment of almost losing control just adds to the tension.

The fact that their whole interlude takes place on a railing is so novel. And, it's totally intense that you have Rex hold himself back and remain restrained within the confines of his bodysuit. Even though she has an orgasm, and he has an orgasm, there is still this underlying sexual tension between them because he held himself back. She wants more. He wants more.

And, you leave the reader definitely wanting more.

So, that leaves this reader to ask... will there be a sequel?

Holy smokes...possessive Rex is totally hot! Love their chemistry, the tension, and the tangible energy that's between them. Beautifully paced, exquisitely detailed, this left me wishing for more...

AWESOME. CAN'T WAIT FOR ANOTHER STORY!!!!!!!