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by Jade_Max

person serendip
schedule March 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Lol! Those boys have quite a treat coming... Lovely beginning! Whew, Stone sure got naked fast, and all those muscles covered in mud, mmmmmmmmmm... Mari made me giggle, the perfect sex starved little kitten, and Whisky yanking Obi into the mud was the best <3
person serendip
schedule March 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, Aala and Obi like to tie each other up... ;-) I'll have to write that back story! I think Aala was a little put out that Korbin said he could do better, lol. Whew, what a scene, Obi tied up, dirty and sudsy in the shower. Wow, so hot, yummy :-D I loved it! I want more!

**two Rex's. I think you broke her.** Lol!!! Love it <3
person laloga13
schedule March 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This was, in a word...EPIC.

Just loved...absolutely LOVED. :D Loved all the ladies together, especially LOVED all the clones (and Obi!) together as well! Sigh...so many rippling muscles, covered in dirty, dirty mud, which - naturally - necessitates that showers must follow. ;) (Side note: it's awesomely hilarious that Anakin's standing there the whole time with the camera...:P)

"That's all mine, girls; eat your hearts out." :D :D :D God...I *love* that Stonewall's pretty much naked the entire time (and in the next one, too!) Sigh...love that guy! And Obi with Trax and Korbin...mmmmm...too bad the vid got cut off right before the main act. ;)

Okay, I could quote so much back to you, but here's one of my favs: "Shouldn't the army have more discipline?" Lucky for us, it doesn't.

Again, (in case it's not obvious), I LOVED THIS. (And that's in all caps, so you know I *mean* it. :P)

You are awesome for writing this! :D
person laloga13
schedule March 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
"Two of Rex... Two of Rex...Two. Of. Rex."

"You broke her," Kura admonished dryly. "Now she'll be useless for whatever comes next."

"She'll get over it," Kali assured the doctor, "give her a minute."

XD Love this! Love the exchange between the ladies, the washing of Obi-Wan, the mini-interlude between Trax and Korbin (so sexy! You pulled that off perfectly! :D), and - of course - the towel-snapping. No men's locker room story is complete without towel-snapping!

Oh my...the end with Rex is just too perfect! :D Seriously, there are no emoticons that can possibly express my delight with this fic! Wonderful job! Also, I love how you wrote my OCs - you're welcome to borrow them at any time! :D