rate_review Reviews

This story was awesome. Great job. :D

awesome. it's made me horny big time

wow that was so amazing!!

This story has been a cavalcade of awesome. Pure, delightful awesome. Seriously Jade...you have out-done yourself! So many yummy naked clones...sigh. It's a fangirl's dream come true. :D

Fabulous job! I just want you to know this was a lot of fun to read and I think you did a great job with our characters :-D Sometimes things get so serious in our stories, it's so nice just to see them have some unadulterated fun ;-) Loved seeing all the boys get their women! (And with it, their second wind) I especially loved seeing Milo and Mari hook up, I think they would mesh well together... innocent and needy at the same time, all with the exuberance of youth ;-) And ohhhhh, Aala and Obi... wow, I loved it. Should I be admitting this? Obi's *Complaints, my dear?* seemed, so, so him... and well, no of course not but... and then his reaction - ripping her shirt, Whisky and Crest holding her down, lol, loved it all... Aala thanks you, even if she was pretending like she didn't really want it :-D Obi knows what she likes

Lips... They're wet. LOL! That was so perfect! I think after his first kiss and subsequent discussion Whisky took it upon himself to learn *a lot*!!! Oh, Whisky... love! I loved Milo here so much, begging to be let out, lol, poor guy! I'm so glad he got some action. Fives taking one for the team was brilliant, multiple women all at once... whew. I bet he is one happy brother. So much good stuff here... Padme's been absent, hm? Wonder what she's been up to... And they're going to instruct Obi to expand Aala's erm horizons?! Lol, can't wait to see this. Get to the other side of that planet!

Haha, another fun chapter and I so want more! Aala trying to be the voice of semi-reason, lol, I think *someone* needs to 'loosen' her up a bit if you catch my drift ;-) Awww, rippling muscles... Can't wait for more! Who needs sleep? :-D

i so can't wait for the next chapter

it was amazing

b-e-a-utiful
and sexy. it made me horny