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for Aftermath of Exposure

by obbiejoe

person Sara
schedule March 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story very sweet and inventive; although the idea of microscopic 'nanites' forcing a person to act incredibly HORNY was a little odd, but everyone all seems to be in agreement you stopped the story right at the GOOD part. :/
person Anon
schedule January 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OH COME ON why did the story STOP right when it just about to finally get to the GOOD part? I sure HOPE that you plan on finishing it sometime SOON! : /
schedule February 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story is rather sweet, in its own way. It's a nice deconstruction of most PWP-type scenarios - very clever!

You can NOT leave it on that cliffhanger though. Ron in this story totally earned himself some pussy.
schedule February 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
loveing it keep it comeing
person hypno009
schedule February 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful job as always. I kinda wish they went all the way, but they came pretty close. I love the way you describe how aroused she gets and how she climaxes. Have you considered writing a story where Kim is in a almost constant orgasmic state?