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for A Frenzy Of Pheromones

by KawaiiCupcakes

schedule February 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
you ain't bad kid, you ain't bad. the only thing is in a few scenes, like the instructional video, you forget how the invader zim works, smut is good, and you work it into the original story well, but things like a normal video explaining puberty would be insane in zim's world. i give you a 8/10, that, with a little work could easily become a 10/10.

(ps: i'd love to see a sequel.)