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February 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God. Most excellant. You stayed within the guild line set by the original series and continued it as it "Might!" have happened, if it hadn't been a Disney cartoon.
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January 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful as always. I like how intimate everything was. I also like how you describe Kim's orgasms. It was my favorite part of the Remember story you wrote earlier. Can't wait to see what you come up with.
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January 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
An excellent story.
The only thing I was put off by was the constant use of "peach" in describing her feminine smile. This is an adult site and you ould've used other words.
Thanks for the great story.
pbow
The only thing I was put off by was the constant use of "peach" in describing her feminine smile. This is an adult site and you ould've used other words.
Thanks for the great story.
pbow
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January 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This was good. Glad that you've returned to KP adult fanfiction. There should be more of it as it practically guarantees lots of hits for the writer.