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for An Orgy Makes It All Complete

by RagingSemi

schedule July 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
BEST FIC EVEEEEEEEER, the twist at the end is a bit of a copout and a swat to the nads but overall is really good :)
schedule January 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Was this fic based off of an episode of the Twilight Zone? I will refuse to believe it's not. This fic specifically reminds me of an episode...and that's not a comment to be taken lightly, since it's an episode that I'm not the most familiar with. And since I don't remember much about the Twilight Zone in general...well, you get the idea.
schedule January 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hahahaha, okay, this one was pretty funny. The ending especially made me laugh since I believe one question answered by the creators was that, they reproduce like horses do, just not on screen XD.

Still, didn't stop me from laughing.
person Alangado
schedule January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM

Great story. It shocked me a litle the revelation about the other ponies, but soon I was OK with it. The plot was very hot and the pacing was fine.

My only problem with this fic is that Twilight accepted too quickly the... um, situation. But it do not bothers me that much.

Keep the good work!

Um, english is not my main language, so sorry about any mistakes in this.