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May 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh what a tangled web! I knew things were going to get complicated once they reached the mining station. Can't wait to see how things go in the next suspenseful installment of this gripping story!
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April 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
very nice
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April 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
awesome
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February 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
excellent story really interesting can't wait to see were you take this story keep up the good work
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February 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
A masterfully told tale, with only a bit of proofreading needed to make it perfect. It felt as though the episode actually could have gone this way if the writers had dared to approach such a story. Miraj and Asohka are HOT together! I sincerely hope this is not the end of the story and that we will get to see much more of the interplay between these two strong-willed women.
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February 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
great story i really like how you tie in their feelings and its just not all about sex can't wait for a new chapter
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January 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
excellent so far why not try a AU have the queen join the republic in secret or something like that thicken the plot abit keep up the good work
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January 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
LOL! Awesome! The light-saber could of got a little more time, especially with Ahsoka turning the tide. Guess we'll have to wait and see.
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January 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I happened to like how the story is turning out. Do you intend on a 'dark' ending where Ashoka is still a slave? It would be titilating.
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January 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
excellent story really enjoying this keep up the good work