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Hello my name is Darrius and I want you to please continue updating your story it's getting better and better now that I can't wait till you update your story but yeah Please continue to update your fanfiction it's getting better and better now so please continue to updating your story is getting more interesting that I can't wait for you to continue updating your story so please continue updating please and thank.

Very sexy. Need to proof-read though. I hope Jake has more of his Mom. He needs someone to let out his youthful energy on.
SailorNemesis

plz write more

Asome fic love how it came out every thing fell in place hut it could have use some more detail but that's my opinion well over all the fic was asome need more fics I hope that I get to read more of your future work keep them coming