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June 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It seems alright but this could have been much better as a steamy affair instead it just seems like ron is an annoyance to her which is kind of like bashing him
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June 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ok is this ann/ron or not also you would think ron would be a little more experieced at this point considering all the times they have had sex but you continue to portray and have him perform like an incompetent virgin. Another thing I want to know is is if all your going to do is bash ron WHY ARE YOU WRITING A STORY WITH HIM AS THE MAIN CHARACTER.
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January 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow gotta say nice twist there on the alternate ending, I did expect it to be James in the ground you know heart attack or something, but good twist. Though I did like the original it seems like it could branch off into something more from what you wrote, hell even a relapse including Kim, but who knows. Looking forward to whatever you may have next, be easy.
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January 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Add in more sex. we all miss it so damn much!
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January 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Well I hope you're muse returns to you soon my friend, as for the mangas I've read those and they are good. Here are some suggestions of my own Nozomi to Kimio, Tate no Yuusha no Nariagari, and Nana to Kaoru
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July 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Nice to see where Kim gets her jealous streak from. Must say nice reunion between Ron and Ann wish it would have been longer. Really can't wait I see what's on deck for these two. Awesome job with this chapter as usual.
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June 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Nice to see the next chapter so soon I'm really itchin to see how the one turns out. I mean the different from gettin walked in on by a pervy teacher and a student. Can't wait to see Anne throw down.
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May 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see you back at it man and I must say this is definitely a cat fight I can't wait to see! Even with the scars that queen sounds hot! Also can't wait to see what they got in store to bring the warrior out of Anne!
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February 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Man Ron is in a very precarious position. Let's just hope the fill up on security and execs. Seems like Adrenna did a bit more than some toe sucking to stay in the queens good graces. Really can't wait for the next installment, of this one.
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December 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Gotta say did not see that coming! Though I am really looking forward to how these two are gonna make it out of this one without getting caught. I mean seems like there's footage now, so no matter what happens this should be interesting.