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for Everything Happens in Ba Sing Se

by CanadianGirl

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schedule September 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Mwahahaha, once again, I love this chapter. Poor Zuko, it's just nerves. They'll have to clean the airship's bedroom a good six or seven times, once it lands, for sure.
schedule August 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like this one; you do a good job of conveying not only the affection of this couple but how much Zuko benefits from Mai. In fact, the only criticism I have is that I'd like to see more of what he brings out in her, as well.