rate_review Reviews

That was really hot. Sokka needs to get it from both ends while Suki watches.

I kind of like it.

Well this is a odd story. But I;m just glad your back and not dead in a hole somewhere. Can't wait to see what you cook up next.

oh god you made suki such a cunt... she would never be so mean to sokka!

You seriously need a beta reader. No one is perfect and everyone makes typos and what not, but I have to be honest - and I mean this in the kindest way - this bad grammar does make you seem underage, like the other reviewer pointed out. It really does. I've seen underaged people be more careful and polished with their grammar than you. Heck, I was better than this when I was ten. If you do not have a beta/proofreader, find one. Then perhaps you would get more positive feedback and ratings for your stories. Many people think that grammar is no big deal, but it counts for a lot more than you think it does, if your story is any indication.

this kind of garbage does not belong here on a site that is for adults.