AFF Fiction Portal
schedule July 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved it.
"Ponykebabsayswhat?" made me laugh so hard XD
I love Trollestia.
person Tszeb
schedule June 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, I really don't know what to say except it was SOOOOOOOO AWSOME!!! :D
person Anon
schedule June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I want to love this fic,a nd its really hot, but trollestia just ruins it for me. Shes not like that at all! I dont know why ppl gotta ruin her character like that
person anonymous
schedule June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The first joke one was kind of funny so I thought this would be, but it really didn't seem all that funny after candy vaj. The sex was ok but it got too detailed and seemed to repeat stuff. It was hard to finish reading as it was Applejack to cum. So it wasn't that bad but could have been better if it was shorter and didn't take so long. Adding the Mommy Nearest was too much too. It didn't fit and probably made lots of people go wtf if they didn't see that one.

I think it's 3 1/2 stars cause it was ok enough but not great, but I will round up to 4.