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October 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Who would've knew that Cutie Marks are erotic to ponies? Great seeing Rarity having a little fun with Twilight and I like the surprise ending to this nice story. Keep it up!
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June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was a very good story. I wonder how the others will react to Sweetie Belle's Cutie Mark? That smells like sequel material.
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May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was so great, please please please do more, I would just die of happiness if you did one with Celestia and Twilight
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May 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
HA. HAHAHA.
My stars, fairy slayer, that was excellent! Cutie marks as erogenous zones, who would've guessed? Maybe that's why the CMC want theirs so bad :p
Everything was set up very believably, and I love me some TwiTy. Or is it Rarilight? Light Tea? Gah, stupid incompatible nicknames. Twilight's initial aversion towards Rarity's coming onto her was very reminiscent of 'Magic Book', and I really loved how Rarity took plenty of caution in using her seductress charm and foreplay prowess to subtly convert Twilight. Very nice. The act itself was well written, and it stood at a good equilibrium between, "Dude, whoa" and "Icanfaptothis.dib". And of course Twilight's trademark ineptness when it comes to relationships made it adorably awkward and gave Rarity a challenge. The Sweetie Belle bit was a nice little cherry on top, though I don't think getting an unobstructed view into Rarity's room without opening the door completely is possible given its position in accordance to the show. But then again, that's just me over thinking things :) Great read, bro. Also, I should probably stop reading these in public. Came dangerously close to an embarrassing situation as I read this at my local cafe. Luckily I had a table to myself ;) OKAY TMI. 5 x's turned on their side for you, good sir.
My stars, fairy slayer, that was excellent! Cutie marks as erogenous zones, who would've guessed? Maybe that's why the CMC want theirs so bad :p
Everything was set up very believably, and I love me some TwiTy. Or is it Rarilight? Light Tea? Gah, stupid incompatible nicknames. Twilight's initial aversion towards Rarity's coming onto her was very reminiscent of 'Magic Book', and I really loved how Rarity took plenty of caution in using her seductress charm and foreplay prowess to subtly convert Twilight. Very nice. The act itself was well written, and it stood at a good equilibrium between, "Dude, whoa" and "Icanfaptothis.dib". And of course Twilight's trademark ineptness when it comes to relationships made it adorably awkward and gave Rarity a challenge. The Sweetie Belle bit was a nice little cherry on top, though I don't think getting an unobstructed view into Rarity's room without opening the door completely is possible given its position in accordance to the show. But then again, that's just me over thinking things :) Great read, bro. Also, I should probably stop reading these in public. Came dangerously close to an embarrassing situation as I read this at my local cafe. Luckily I had a table to myself ;) OKAY TMI. 5 x's turned on their side for you, good sir.
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May 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i LOVED this!!!! i hope u do more fics like this w/twilight!
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May 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
...and was it so bad I planned to look at a MLP story in hopes of some inter-pony fisting? The answer... is yes. I'm messed up. I did see your follow up though, and when I did start reading I knew hoofing didn't mean what I thought it meant. :)
That paragraph with Rarity adjusting the dress was sexy - no wonder Twilight was shaking! The oral was very well written too, I could totally see that in my head (after googling to check I pony appearance as I did with that other story... incidently, youtube has some pretty funny re-dubs of the movie 300 onto MLP episodes. They get the lip and music sync spot on!) and of course, you can't go wrong with an erotically applied unicorn horn!
Great fun. At this rate I am gonna end up drawn into the MLP fandom...
That paragraph with Rarity adjusting the dress was sexy - no wonder Twilight was shaking! The oral was very well written too, I could totally see that in my head (after googling to check I pony appearance as I did with that other story... incidently, youtube has some pretty funny re-dubs of the movie 300 onto MLP episodes. They get the lip and music sync spot on!) and of course, you can't go wrong with an erotically applied unicorn horn!
Great fun. At this rate I am gonna end up drawn into the MLP fandom...