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April 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am eager to see what you do with this subject. It looks bad but anything can happen in a story. Great start.
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April 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am very anxious to read more of this. I think the start was aweseome and this for me is something I thought about often. Hornet
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April 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love the situation you have them in. I too have thought about what if Toph could see. Please continue
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April 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have always wondered about this subject too! I am thrilled you have taken it on. The opening put the hooks into me and now you must pull me ashore. What will happen to Toph and how will she change.
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April 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What If Indeed!!! I love awesome what if stories. You have started a chain of thought in my mind that will need to be answered by you. Awesome beginning please continue!
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April 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
How can you pack so much depth into the small portion that you have given us. This is beautiful.