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August 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
it was really good, im still jacking off
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August 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
margaret is a cardenal not a robin, though i did like the story. it realy seamed as if it were from regular show. Nice Work!
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August 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I didn't expect what happened to happen, but stuff like that is always happening on the show so it made sense in context.
You write really well! Glad to see you chose to write about this show. Hope you do more!
You write really well! Glad to see you chose to write about this show. Hope you do more!
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December 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Actually well written and if there was only to be one story on this site (which it is) then I'd be glad it was this one. Very cute and I loved the ending.
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December 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
No Reviews here? Are you serious? Well since I am the first to review, I'll try to make as best as possible.
Wow, this is the first Regular Show Fanfiction I have ever read, and I am simply impressed with it. Even I like how the storyline connects with something twisted like the original series would usually do. However, the beginning of the segment between Margaret and Mordecai threw me off a little bit, especially how she got blunt with Mordecai in the kitchen. I guess I was expecting some things here and there. But you still did good keeping the folks properly in character.
On the other hand, I am absolutely impressed with your writing and how you managed to describe a lot of things without overlapping the material. To be quite honest, this puts my own style of writing in shame and this is a compliment.
Concluding this, I hope to read more stories like this from you in the future. Keep up the Good work. :)
-Nite`Wolf
Wow, this is the first Regular Show Fanfiction I have ever read, and I am simply impressed with it. Even I like how the storyline connects with something twisted like the original series would usually do. However, the beginning of the segment between Margaret and Mordecai threw me off a little bit, especially how she got blunt with Mordecai in the kitchen. I guess I was expecting some things here and there. But you still did good keeping the folks properly in character.
On the other hand, I am absolutely impressed with your writing and how you managed to describe a lot of things without overlapping the material. To be quite honest, this puts my own style of writing in shame and this is a compliment.
Concluding this, I hope to read more stories like this from you in the future. Keep up the Good work. :)
-Nite`Wolf