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August 17, 2019 at 12:00 AM
can I be in this story
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August 17, 2019 at 12:00 AM
can I be in this story
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August 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wheeee, I am so excited to see an update to this story.
Poor Sokka. Seeing him get a little care taken is a nice change... but of course, your slaves aren't any use if they're too broken to play with.
The scenes with Ozai are spectacular. I really enjoy how he's more... gentle than Azula at moments, although that's not really the right word. That last scene especially was so hot.
Poor Sokka. Seeing him get a little care taken is a nice change... but of course, your slaves aren't any use if they're too broken to play with.
The scenes with Ozai are spectacular. I really enjoy how he's more... gentle than Azula at moments, although that's not really the right word. That last scene especially was so hot.
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January 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Very good story so far, I'm on chapter 2 and am surprised no one has reviewed such a great story. You make the characters believable and put real emotions in them. I'm about to read chapter 3, looking forward to it!
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January 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This was really really good. I was amazed at your skill. I would only suggest re thinking the point of view you tell this story from. But this was by far one of the best stories I've read on this site
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December 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is exactly what I wanted. You have no idea how perfectly this story matches the fantasy in my mind right now... I just wish there were more parts of it already written!
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August 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I am so impressed with the quality of this story. The way you write Azula's insanity is incredible. You portrayal in the cusp 'twixt sanity and madness is masterful. Very few people are able to write this cohesively.
Your characterzations are right on, from the lowly maids to the gruff guards, and that's not even touching Sokka. You have hit the mark!
This is perfectly in character for him. His struggle, his internal strife, especially his pain. Not only in the psychological sense, but the discriptors of the physical make me shiver. You are an amazing writer and I wish I could read the next installment now.
Keep typin'
Your characterzations are right on, from the lowly maids to the gruff guards, and that's not even touching Sokka. You have hit the mark!
This is perfectly in character for him. His struggle, his internal strife, especially his pain. Not only in the psychological sense, but the discriptors of the physical make me shiver. You are an amazing writer and I wish I could read the next installment now.
Keep typin'
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June 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was just ausome. You are really a great writer and this is a great plot line. I hope you continue.