rate_review Reviews

I'm really enjoying this. The real strength is in your characterization of Tristepin; the background and voice you've given him fit in nicely with what we know of him from the show. The story could probably use another proofread, as there are a few cases in which words aren't properly capitalized at the beginning of sentences, but it's not too distracting. I eagerly await future chapters.

Sweet Sacrier! I think you did a pretty good job, I don't know if that's what you intended, but Tristepin's questions made me laugh. 'The teeth?' Awesome. Also, Pipoun, Eva, it's not good to hold back. Really, it's bad for your body. Get it on already, the UST could kill you! Keep up the good work!

You tease, you! You can't leave it like that, I must know what happens! Will our brave Sir Tristepin de Percedal ever learn the secrets of snoo-snoo? Or will he remain ignorant of such bliss? The world demands an answer!