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by boratoki

schedule August 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Mmm... you sure do know how to make a girl happy. Sub-Stan, goth sex, sex in public... It's just so delicious! Make me embarrassed over my own goth 3some fic
person Kasey
schedule July 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was freaking awesome. I've always loved the idea of Stan and the Tallest Goth, but have never come across any fanfics starring these two lovely hotties. You have no idea how grateful I am that you shared this wonderful fic! And it was written so expertly and amazingly, which is a HUGE bonus; I was able to enjoy this fic(immensely) because of how well you wrote it. It sucks finding a story about an obscure pairing that you adore and getting all excited and then discovering that it is an absolute mess-- typos everywhere, disjointed, unsexy sex, OOCness, the list goes on. Bravo for trying, but it's still a giant letdown. BUT, your story is all kinds of delicious; steamy details, Stan, hot guys, Stan, perfect sentence structure, even has a bit of plot, and did I mention Stan? because I meant to; I loovee him to pieces. I could go on all day about how much I adore your writing but I'll end my review by saying: You are a very talented author, so please continue to write, and thanks again for sharing your work with all of us fans. ;-D
person ShanChan
schedule May 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
^^^^What the other person said. After reading this I'm sad this couple isn't more popular. Because this was amazing. The domination and submission really caught my interest. I thought it was going to be plain one sided (which I usually like) but it wasn't. And it was awesome.
person WOW
schedule March 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
HOLY--!

I read this because the couple listed in the summary just surprised me so much. But DAMN that was so hot and the couple actually made a LOT of sense.

Excellent job, I don't know what I was expecting when I read this but I was BLOWN AWAY by your writing here. Amazing.

XD I'm now a bit sad that this couple isn't more popular now. Wonderful work.