rate_review Reviews

The description says "angst," but reading it made me giggle. Am I an evil person?

I sincerely enjoyed your take on "Derpy" hooves. Making her seem like a victim of bullying never occurred to me. Her embarrassment and depression and even her attempted suicide were all portrayed in a humorous way, but her pain still felt very real. I liked how you made all the characters with negative emotions band together to express themselves in a positive way that was still true to their genuine personalities. Suddenly having them all turn to goodness and light would have felt very "fake" (and this is a story about talking, flying, magical horses etc., mind you.) I particularly liked that you used Spike, very effectively, as Betrayal. He's my favorite character because he's snarky, not afraid to call 'em as he sees 'em, and often seems very wise in his observations. I think you've really caught the "flavor" of the series and have done it great justice. I hope you have the time and inspiration to keep writing stories like this. Everypony who likes the series would appreciate this!

This was a fun read. At first I was all sad for her then it just got better and better. Keep at it :D

i have no clue as to why i love this so...only, that i do!

What an excellent twist! I'm glad she found her rightful place in the spotlight. All the rocker-ponies' names were spot on, too. Trixie would definitely be Ego, haha.

aww, poor Derpy!

Okay, now we have an alcoholic mail carrier pony, who thinks everyone is out to get her? Interesting enough. Had me giggling at some of the sign offs! Thanks for sharing, PW

"What a dock!!" The equine cursing gets me every time! Poor Bubbly just can't get a break. I almost feel bad for laughing.

I saw this show for the very first time today and thought of poor Bubbly. These letters are very entertaining, though I do hope the poor filly finds some relief sooner or later!