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by FairySlayer

schedule December 18, 2025 at 12:00 AM
Put the three sentences on separate lines and this would be poetry. Bravo.
schedule December 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Once again, you have surprised me FS...
person JayDee
schedule December 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I laughed at the story, and at the forum edit about remembering what the crime scene tag meant (working that in would have been a challenge :D). So Frosty got iced and you set it out very well in the brief wordage. Particularly good is how just using 'frozen juices' and 'thigh marks' clearly implised the sexualised slaying as opposed to, say, a hit over his gambling debts.
schedule December 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Eek, poor snowman! Definitely NOT what I was expecting! I was actually expecting it to be the other way around, an evil snowman going around raping/killing humans, and most certainly not the way you presented it! Kudos to you for completely and utterly flooring me! *claps ferociously* And all of this in a bloody TwitFic! Unbelievable!
schedule November 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Mwahahahaha! Poor Frosty!