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November 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You can usually tell how committed an author is to thier story by the third chapter and I can read that you are very committed to this story. It is flowing like water and I love the chracters you have decided to place in it. I am so glad Aang and Azula are the main players and you do not deviate from them. I am addicted. This story is AWESOME!
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November 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is SO captivating. I love the situation you have put these two in. I love this story. Aang and Azula are perfect together. PLEASE CONTINUE
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November 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thisis one of thebest Non-Zutara stories I have read.
First, you takke the most powerful bender aang and you put him with a BAd Ass woman named Azula(who is pwerful in her own right) and then you do something unexpected. You marry them...TO EACH OTHER!!!!
BRILLIANT
Not only have you made the townspeople fearful they are also jealous. there are good and evil forces who want them apart or dead or want Azula all to themselves.(as if she would leave the most powerful man she would ever know.)
Secondly, You go and put all that sexy , sultry stuff in it and you got a winner. What they don't know is what LUST can and will make you do, and what it can turn into.
Aang will defend Azula. I love that he sleepd inthe middle of the bed to antagonize her or get closer. I love that he uses the unconsumated marriage to his advantage or when he is feeling angry towards her. That can be fire.
I love that Azula laughs and has the gorgeous ability to cut anyone down. I love her scaving one-liners and words. What an awesome touch to give her personality. She will defend her home with the Avatar. She is loyal and still the BADASS!
Ready and willing to read IT ALL ~FAB~
First, you takke the most powerful bender aang and you put him with a BAd Ass woman named Azula(who is pwerful in her own right) and then you do something unexpected. You marry them...TO EACH OTHER!!!!
BRILLIANT
Not only have you made the townspeople fearful they are also jealous. there are good and evil forces who want them apart or dead or want Azula all to themselves.(as if she would leave the most powerful man she would ever know.)
Secondly, You go and put all that sexy , sultry stuff in it and you got a winner. What they don't know is what LUST can and will make you do, and what it can turn into.
Aang will defend Azula. I love that he sleepd inthe middle of the bed to antagonize her or get closer. I love that he uses the unconsumated marriage to his advantage or when he is feeling angry towards her. That can be fire.
I love that Azula laughs and has the gorgeous ability to cut anyone down. I love her scaving one-liners and words. What an awesome touch to give her personality. She will defend her home with the Avatar. She is loyal and still the BADASS!
Ready and willing to read IT ALL ~FAB~
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November 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You have everything in this story to make it the best. I am blown away by how sexy it is. Aang and Azula were made for each other by the way you write them. I can already see patterns of jealousy from both of them. I do so love when Aang calls her his wife. It feels wrong and right at the same time. You have done an excellent chapter and have kept your promise of lengthening your next chapter. I am excited to continue with this story. It is different and EXCEPTIONAL! ~Wisdom
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November 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You have given me something to dream about. These two are so sultry and sexy together it is mesmerizing. I love the way they interact. I love their personalities. I just love them together. Do not let Jet turn the people against Aang. I have a feeling he would do something like that. They are too dynamic to be apart. Excellent chapter will wait for MORE!
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November 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like this. It's different and steamy.
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November 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
These two are so sexy together. I love that Azula is humanized. I love that Aang is all grown up and powerful. I hate weak Aang. I love this situation you have them in you write it so sultry and lustful. I am loving this different Avatar angle. keep going!!! Walkingpapers
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November 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What an awesome concept. I love how you are going about this story. Perfect chapter length and it was filled with all things addicting. I love how they interact with each other. They are dangerous together and also so sexy. I want another chapter ASAP.
EXCELLENT JOB
EXCELLENT JOB
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November 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful price of work to read while having lunch!
The uneasy fights and truces these two have is so addicting! I love it. I love the one liners they share. I love that Azula has a personality and not just anger. She likes to laugh and we see glimpses of it through out this chapter. I love Aang's dominate side. He is the most powerful bender on earth, it is about time someone wrote about it.
I love this story if I have not said it already. Please continue
The uneasy fights and truces these two have is so addicting! I love it. I love the one liners they share. I love that Azula has a personality and not just anger. She likes to laugh and we see glimpses of it through out this chapter. I love Aang's dominate side. He is the most powerful bender on earth, it is about time someone wrote about it.
I love this story if I have not said it already. Please continue
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November 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The rampant emotions running through my mind and body as I read this story is Thrilling! I love it!
Aang and Azula together is dangerous, beautiful, Sexy, unimaginable and AWESOME when you write it. You have more than redeemed yourself from the first chapter. This story will be epic and AWESOME!
Aang and Azula together is dangerous, beautiful, Sexy, unimaginable and AWESOME when you write it. You have more than redeemed yourself from the first chapter. This story will be epic and AWESOME!