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that was too many gargoyles to keep track of

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Nice! Loved Demona's scene, hope there's more with her soon. She seems to be sadly neglected in erotic stories nowadays.

So far, so good. Hope for some hot Demona scenes, soon. Hmm, she's alone... any chance for a solo scene? ;)

And will Shari be in this story?

This story is looking good so far. I hope you update soon. Any chance Macbeth stopping Demona from ruining the wedding? Just think if they were found in the coat closet making out.Maybe Macbeth will promise to punish Demona for all the wrongs that she has done aganist humanity and gargoyle kind. He is really the only one who really understands and can keep up with her. I can see Macbeth whisper in Demona's ear "Your such a hard ass and a naughty gargoyle."And if they are found Demona could say "What, we are married we just never consumated it."
I would if Goliath will ever get engaged to Elisa. I would what kind of engagement gift he will give her perhaps
gift wrapped criminals? Well update soon and I am glad that I am your first review.