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for Undertow

by Malestorm

person Novicegirl
schedule October 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent!.

Please continue this I can already see and feel the greatness it has. I Love the premise and the writing.
person Granite
schedule October 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
To read your marvelous work again makes me shiver with excitement at your return to us. I actually think more about your work than mine and that sometimes causes writer's block but I do not care. I love your stuff.

I agree with FAB and her take on the Blue Lagoon getaway only with the Avatar looming. I do not know how she will react seeing that out of all the islands on the ocean she ends up at the one Zuko has claimed. AWESOME! What will aang do if he finds them because you know he is going to look. Willhe do something un Avatar- like.The possibilities are endless here. I can hardly wait for you next installment.
I love your work!

P.S. I see your editing your stories. Should we expect updates? I am watching and waiting. Stone2fire
schedule September 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very very good. I would really like to read more. The plot line you're setting up will most deffenatly be an interesting one. I can't wait to see in which direction you take it. Update soon please. ^.^.
person RedWine
schedule September 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Reely well done! I am having thoughts of the Blue Lagoon type and I am loving it. I want to read more of this. You are a terrific writer. FAB