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Aw poor Kraz lol Really good chapter to help move the story along as well. Bah I'm having trouble reviewing it tonight, still frazzled after my longest chem lab ever. :/ But trust me it is a very good chapter and your oc Kraz does not detract from the story at all and makes for a very fun POV.

Oh man first off welcome back! :3 Second, I love love love my childhood nintendo memories :) I'm so tempted to get the new Zelda games for the DS. Ok and Thirdly ugh! LOVED this chapter! The way you wrote Dib and Zim reacting to the whole ordeal was perfect. You really do these characters their story universe justice. I just love your writing so much for this story XD Looking forward to the next chapter ^^ Have fun with zelda! I've had to settle with watching videos of play-throughs on youtube hehe.

Aww You're oh so welcome! This was an amazing chapter, the plot is really building now and its quite exciting! So glad Zim got to kill Iso :D hehe As for typos, I didn't see any glaring ones at all, just a few grammar typos really so I hope you won't have too much work if you come back to edit it more. Its very very readable now though and I didn't have to stop and re-read a spot trying to figure out what was being said either so that's good lol. Thank you for getting this chapter out despite being tired and before your vacation ^^ Enjoy your time off! I'll be here patiently waiting for the next awesome chapter :3

lol, the cabbage patch kids thin at the end. Also, Iso was kind of full of himself by the end...although he did succeed in raping an alien....yeah. Glad he is dead, not so glad that Zim is some alien equivalent of being pregnant. Anyways...I look forward to more!

Whoa, I think you've unleashed a new fetish in fanfiction for me...bravo...I think. Regardless, I am captivated by this story, and look forward to more.

Wow! What a wonderful chapter to have waited on! hehe This new Pak thing is interesting, and I feel like I know where it might lead but I'll wait to find out when the next chapter comes out :3 Keep up the good work and enjoy the vacation :D I'll be busy getting to my 3rd year of college at the end of next month.

I get the same way with drawing, but I always get frustrated it the desire to draw never lasts long lol. Anyways, oh man, oh man poor Zim! But I loved it, very nice chapter! I love that your bring ZADR into this now too :3 lol I can't wait to see Dib's reaction to Zim's words haha. Enjoy your drawing time while it lasts ^^

Yes Zim, get your Zimy self back into action! Loved that part, poor Zim though lol. Love how kind Dib is being in your story, and is inner turmoil with his morals (forgot to mention that in the first review I gave you). Can't wait to find out what Zim will do in your next chapter!

Wow,I just started reading this today and I got all the way to chapter 13. I love this. I could definitely learn a lot from you about writing. That Iso guy really creeps me out! I knew he was trouble the moment he entered the story.

Aww, I feel so sorry for Dib and Zim! I just wanna cut Iso's nuts off! 0.o

But, anyway I really like the way you write and thanks for reviewing my stories. Without you I would have never realized my stories suck. ^^'

More Please! XD

:D Thanks for that little sneak peak and the little 'deleted scenes' lol. Can't wait for next chapter, looks like its gonna be a good one! :3