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October 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a very powerfully written story and I love it!
I love the way Zuko and katara speak to eachother in private and then put on their game faces when the others arrive. This story is beautiful please continue
I love the way Zuko and katara speak to eachother in private and then put on their game faces when the others arrive. This story is beautiful please continue
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September 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is so welll written. I am eager for the next chapter. I am glad you have returned. I love the different view this story has. Walkinpapers
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September 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Poor Katara.
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September 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is wonderful story with strong writing and an interesting plot! i am looking forward to reading more chapters and hopefully its completion!
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September 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I wait for the next chapter with rabid excitement.
This story is different from many in this fandom. I love the fact that Zuko and Katara are planning the attack rather than always being the innocent receiving the pain. I hope revenge is painful and slow. Great writing
This story is different from many in this fandom. I love the fact that Zuko and Katara are planning the attack rather than always being the innocent receiving the pain. I hope revenge is painful and slow. Great writing
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September 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully Done!
Zuko and Katara together to cause choas unheard of...usually they are on hte receivibg end of such malice. I love the way you wrote the end with no words. I could imagine the setting and feel her lonliness. This is a well written story all around and a must read. I will keep checking for updates. Viewerfinder
Zuko and Katara together to cause choas unheard of...usually they are on hte receivibg end of such malice. I love the way you wrote the end with no words. I could imagine the setting and feel her lonliness. This is a well written story all around and a must read. I will keep checking for updates. Viewerfinder
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September 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great, great, great job! You gotta keep writing!
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September 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very , Very ,interesting concept of knowing the spy but not knowing what he may or may not do. I love the idea of adding Katara into the mix and there goes the sultry feeling I just know you are going to add to this. The idea that they are going to have to do somethings that they possibly are not ready for will make this so AWESOME and sexy. I cannot begin to tell you how anxious I am. Continue
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September 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love the start and the possibility of the good guys being the deceivers. I am eager for more.
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September 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I cannot begin to express my joy with your return to writing. IAm also intrigued and thrilled by the role og good being blurred by revenge. This is a tantalizing story to say the least!!!
Please feed my growing hunger until I want for no more.
Please feed my growing hunger until I want for no more.