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Pizza & orgy time!

Man, my love/hate relationship with these stories grows by the day. Watching these characters have wild sexual parties is great. Watching them all turn into horror movie psycho killers is breaking my heart. Kim continues her degeneration into a remorseless butcher with noone capable of properly inducing the guilt or insecurity that was common in Kim's base character.(-unless you were perhaps to introduce an alternate universe, still good, Kim Possible in some way. Perhaps you intend to eventually. anyway-) There are still many different pieces of the Kimuniverse you could introduce. The attitudinator, for example. It might be interesting to see how Evil Ron would interact with the Possibles. He's the only one who ever scared Shego in any meaningful way and he was definitely more competetant than Kim's usual foes. He also seemed to be pretty good at making people suffer. Truth is, he might well be a match for Kim and co. Especially if maybe Nana Possible knew Kim would likely find and kill her and maybe put a recording device in place to record her doing it. Keep going.

Olivia Porter, Vivian Porter's little sister I wonder if she will be joining the Possible Gang? After all she will bee close to the tweeb's age. I would imagine that Joss is good and ready to dump Ron for the clueless dupe he is.

"An evil giggle instead."

SS is right, in that people won't want to see change because it is against what they belive in, even when they are wrong.

Whoa bunch of new chapter all at once really loveing this and Ron really is stupid anyway can't wait to see more.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

Now heros and villians will have to worry about country's boarders as well as passports and visas to enter said nations. They will also have to obay the law about any type of weapon carried. Now anyone in in the world can sue for damages and take them to court, there to be unmasked (for those who have secert identies (I know spelling).

Master Plan = World Domanation = World Orgy

SJ being disinherated and here I thought SJ would have been killed by SS & BB so they marry. And SJ turns hero with Ron.

Anne is really getting into the whole mad 'super-science' schick with experments on Viceroy.

Like the sex sceanes.

A good story thus far, but I don't like how Kim is going the "Kill everyone who opposes me!" route. The fact is that I agree with her (with the dealbreaker being that I don't agree with killing anyone!) that society has to change and allow people to do anything that they wish to do, as long as they are not forcing someone else to do something that they do not want to do.
But killing people? Total dealbreaker for me, because you are no better nor worse than those people are, therefore you have no right to judge them or to kill them.

Yay updated really fast love this story and can't wait to see how Kim's plan comes togather.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae