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I was really surprised that after such a huge victory of disbanning the Middleton Pack that there wasn't a "celebration" - Kimmie sex style that is. Little sad about that. Through Chapter 12 and still no sex scene, closest naughty thing was Anne's medical examination on Bonita. Tisk Tisk.

Simply awsome, I'm speechless.

I CAN'T STAND IT ANYMORE!!! I'VE JUST GOT TO TELL YOU!!! I'm three chapters into a sequel to these stories of yours. It begins some time after the end of this one. Ron has been turned evil again and has captured most of the possible women and is torturing. He hasn't got them all for that you'd have to read the story to know. I love to coordinate my story with yours but as you still haven't posted any new chapters of your next part, I have no idea which direction you're going to go in. This and my other reviews should give you my email address. Let me know if you'd like to let me coordinate my story with yours. I'm not so presumptuous as to try and yank this storyline out from under you and who knows, you might even like what I've done so far so much you decide to let me do the next one for you. :)

Thank you for the ending. I've been waiting for Kim to get a little bit of it back. Counldn't happen to a nicer girl.

Great Story. Been following all your stuff. Love it! I just hope this latest turn for Ron turns out to give him the backbone/support to be a proper rival to Kim. I love everything you write and give it highest praise but it seems with the pact gone and such that everything started going Kim's way too easily. Granted the latest chapter is a major setback but a sudden battle wound just doesn't have the same feel as an tried and true recurring antagonist. Ron is just such an idiot most of the time I'm just hoping what has happened to him pushes him into his rare moments of clarity...even if it is for the wrong reasons!

Keep it up!

I really hope part three dosen't take to long to come out i really want to see how this all turns out

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

Oh now that's the perfect place to put a cliff hanger!
I'm gonna be checking this thing like a maniac while awaiting the new 'book' of the story.

Would you hury up with 'Demon Princess'?! I've now read both copies of The Middleton Pact and Dark Mistress and now I NEED to know what happens to Kim! You are an amazing writer!

A good story, but again.... I have to bash on Kim using 'kill, kill, kill' as her solution to every problem and especially with her killing Motor Ed, who basically had done nothing to her since turning into a villian and giving Adrena Lynn to her mother as a 'test subject' (i.e. torture slave).
With all due respect, this could SERIOUSLY backfire on Kim, if people start looking through the obvious and seeing what is underneath. Sure, people like Phred are MORE evil than Kim by justifying their actions with 'It's for people's own good!' however Kim is going down that road as well.

Really love this story and can't wait to seee what happens next don't have a lot else to say

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae