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by Starkarm

person Ice13
schedule August 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
While a very well written story, I must say Bonnie's internal dialogue sounds more like the monologuing of Doctor Doom or Lex Luthor than the Bonnie we'd know from the show. It was actually kind of distracting.

None the less, the plot was decent, and the pairing unique. Good job!!