rate_review Reviews

I've loved this story for a long time, but now I finally have an account to review it. It really deserves more love on this site, and if I could figure out how the hell to favorite it on here I would. Your sex scene was totally MIND BLOWING. It is just so emotionally charged, and beautifully worded. The way you wrote it was so intense and vivid, and I aspire to write like you someday.

I have to say I was completely impressed by this story of yours. It was such a nice treat to read how two women would make love for the first time and not the instant hard pounding, that so many men seem to love thinking how it should go. Speaking from my own personal lesbian experiences as well. Very very well done. Such sweet tender moments and erotic thinking we sometimes do in the heat of the moment. A+ well done. Would love to see Shego come after that flask of hers, just how would she go about that? Excellent writing. Thank you for taking the time to write this. It made for an especially nice raining afternoon.