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Well there might be room for a short epilog, show what everyone does after the battle's over. Where they go, where they end up. Entirely up to you, of course.

A nice little story. Not as long as the first one, but perhaps that's for the best. I doubt people would have wanted another 200+ chapter epic so soon. Nice little finisher there. And now a few random predictions of where people wound up. Baring in mind this is just me babbling.

Eventually Tobey retired, leaving the company to Arianna. He and Violet built a house by the sea and settled down to make lots of little Brothers and sisters for Arianna. Arianna developed a line of robotic limb enhancements, like her own, for the Lexiconian and Decimalian armies, thus building McCallister industries into one of the most profitable robotics companies around.

Carina and Arianna continued figting crime on Mars until they graduated college. Ariannna went into a semi-retirement from the team to focus on running the company. Carina eventually expanded Team Alphanumeric into a league of superheroes covering Earth, Lexicon, Decimal and Mars.

Becky's mom spent sometime as state governor, then retired to spend her time with her husband, relaxing and reveling in the great-grandkids her grandaughter provided her.

Dr. Two-Brains and the Ring carried on with business as usual. After all it wouldn't be any fun to just quit. The Birthday Girl eventually got over her selfish ways as she got older and eventually joined Team Alphanumeric.

After retiring from local politics, Chuck and the Butcher eventually founded a franchise of fast food restaruants specializing in gourmet meat sandwhiches. Dr. Tubing and the girl who invented the Wordgirl look-alike battle suit, I forget her name, eventually came to work for McCalister industries as leading designers and providing tech to Team Alphanumeric.

And on a completely random note, Huntress eventually gave up on trying to kill Caelum and married Trog. He may not exactly be the smartest, but he excels where it counts, if you know what I mean, LOL.

Ooh, heading for the climax. Can't wait for the fireworks to really start.

Time, I think, for the climax?

You know now that I think about it, you raise a good point. Wordgirl and Mathwhiz did defeat Chaos fairly strongly the first time. And they did say that Chaos seems different somehow this time. I wonder of Zaniah's dimension has a Chaos of it's own?

Man I hope Becky and Tim don't push this heart of knowledge thing too far. Fooling around with that kind of power too long could have some nasty side effects. I like the idea of Becky and Tim needing the power to take down a tough opponant, it builds tension. But you should have at least had Caelum and Emma be be able to do some damage, this way they just look weak and they're not.

Aw, nothing takes war to a new level like family. Bare in mind Lexicon and Decimal aren't alone. There's the Alliance as well. And of course Celia could call in her people, they're strength would be a big help. I wonder if Blizzard is from the same race as Ice? Perhaps another colony? I'm thinking Huggy might have to call in a few more favors.

So Fire and Ice are back in the game, though they're still a fair way out. You know if Arianna has a moment she could built some flight suits like her own for the three. Of course there's no telling how effective they'd be with no experience. Man this just keeps heating up.

Heh, thanks are really heating up. I wonder if all this heart of knowledge business will have a permanant effect on Becky and Tim. Don't forget the robot duplicates, they can fly too. It might be a good show of power if Chaos's forces actually managed to damage them. Just a thought.

It's alright, not every story needs to be an epic novel. A shorter story might be good in this case. Just one thing, Is there any chance of Tobey and his father having some sort of reconcilliation or is their relationship too far gone. And you know Warp could just go inside the tanks, right?