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July 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ah, so Kim has finally figured out that there is a 'plot' going on here. I wouldn't be surprised if someone was manipulating the Pact Council and Bonnie as well, in order for some nefarious scheme. I doubt it's Wade, he's been pretty helpful and hasn't shown any real 'evil' tendencies. Sensei and Yori? Possible, but even with them, this seems beyond their ability to manipulate. A great new chapter, and the thing about Kim being turned into a Monkey again... priceless!
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July 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
More, what can I say?
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June 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really loveingthis and can't wait to see what happens at the party and also i love mother/daughter syuff so really hope Kim does more with her mom.
With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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June 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
loved it, looking forward to more
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June 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A good story and another great chapter to the story. Kinda surprised me that Ron did the whole 'sneaky' thing with Kim. As I have pointed out to people, there are different kinds of villians. Villians who try to kill as many people as they can, villians who avoid killing people, etc.
They are not all 'equal' in badness.
They are not all 'equal' in badness.
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June 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great new chapter and i loved what Ned asked really looking forward to the next one.
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With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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June 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that I like where this story is going for the most part. I always liked KimRon better than Kigo but I still like this one. I do, however have a small nitpick. Kim's Mom does NOT call her Kimmiecub. That is exclusive to her Dad. Kim's mom calls her Kimmie:
"Kimmie, the nana dress is cute."
"Kimmie, it's just meatloaf."
"Sorry, Kimmie. I've gotta drive the boys to soccer practice.'
Always Kimmie. You might want to change that.
"Kimmie, the nana dress is cute."
"Kimmie, it's just meatloaf."
"Sorry, Kimmie. I've gotta drive the boys to soccer practice.'
Always Kimmie. You might want to change that.
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June 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
sweet story. would have reviewed sooner, but i procrastinate too much.
looking forward to the next update.
just out of curiosity, what would be the basic rules in the Middleton Pact?
does that cover stealing medical supplies, because you constantly hear about henchmen complaining about medical coverage.
maybe a special contact in acquisitions could help procure needed medical supplies. Ann is a doctor, and the villainy business is dangerous.
looking forward to the next update.
just out of curiosity, what would be the basic rules in the Middleton Pact?
does that cover stealing medical supplies, because you constantly hear about henchmen complaining about medical coverage.
maybe a special contact in acquisitions could help procure needed medical supplies. Ann is a doctor, and the villainy business is dangerous.
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June 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Man you really did a great job makeing Bonnie evil...Not that she wasn't half way there to start with and as for the battle suits they would be more than distracting to me! Anyways looking forward to what's next.
With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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June 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
great chapter, love the story. Looking forward to more.