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August 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Two chapters at once very nice looking forwrad to more is all i have to say for now.
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With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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August 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
aww, you removed the ending for chapter 26 where kim left a message for ron carved in joss' flesh. i think that ending had a better impact and reinforced the reason why ron should back off while exemplifying his stupidity when he chooses not to.
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August 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OHhhh major plot twist can''t wait to see how Betty deals with everything that happned to her and dlad to see Yori is on thier side that'll help a lot anyways looking forwaod to more
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August 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well they are there just way under Ron. Don't have much to say other than looking forward to more.
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August 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome so far, read it over about two days, couldn't stop readin' it, couldn't wait fer the next page ta load. How ya continue writin'.
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August 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love what you've changed, makes it even better! Keep it up! And THANK YOU for making it more graphic! Keep writing.
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August 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well some good and bad things are going to be happening to kim very soon and Ron really does have amazing dumb luck.
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August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I wouldn't say that Ron would be 'throwing his life away', but I do think that he needs to see that killing Sensei was something that, while regretable, needed to be done. I don't say that most times about someone killing another person, but the way that you wrote it, this had to be done. Ron just has too much 'morality' and not enough common sense.
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August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
No offence but this story sucks if your going to make kim evil make ron evil too dear lord I hate these brake up ron and Kim so kim can be with Shego fics
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August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering how she'sd deal with the deal she made with Joss and as for what that one person said about ron haveing more good thean common sense that's also known as Lawful stupid with is just what he was in the show and in this really looking forward to the next chapter.
With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae