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I really like this story and I'm happy when ever I see a new chapter.
I truly hope you will choose Zuko to be with the Earth king. Poor Zuko needs some love in his life and I don't see Jet being able to really give him that.

liking the reactions and Iroh's protectiveness!!

loved jet's reaction to zuko( i can't wait to see if there's going to be a love triangal between jet, zuko and kuei).

can't wait for more and im loving the pace of this story keep it up :)

What a great read. Your writing style is fluid and eloquent, without talking down to the reader. You've successfully implemented Zuko's condition into canon, making changes when needed and keeping the general atmosphere of the episodes, even down to the dialogue at times. One of the most enjoyable parts, for me, has to be Zuko and Kuei's evolving relationship. I'd never considered this pairing before, but I find myself hoping it'll work out in the end. Kuei would be a wonderful husband for Zuko; he's already proven himself compassionate and genuinely interested in the Prince as a person, which is something Zuko sorely needs. He benefits greatly from stability and kindness, and while Iroh gives that to him in spades, having another source would do him a world of good. A brief shifting to Long Feng/Zuko would be interesting to see before the story's conclusion, as CultOfStrawberry said, but I look forward to whatever you produce. Keep writing, and I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

I'm digging Kuei/Zuko, but since you said this might change, I am really hoping there might be some Long Feng/Zuko action even if they don't end up together at the end. That would be so hot, but I am sure that whatever this story ends up as, I'll enjoy it because you're a good writer.

loved this chapter :) loving the kuei/zuko interaction and can't wait for more. im really excited to see how the gaang will react to zuko! keep up the hard work, you're doing great!!

Oh god, thank you so much for sending out a mass message, it was an awesome chapter.
And Kuei still so lovable!

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awsome chapter!! can't wait to see what's going to happen :) loving this story, keep it up :]

NO! A Cliffhanger!!!! -cry- Anyway I loved this chapter he is more shy around the king now and apparently falling in love and his uncle realizes that! -fan girlish shriek- More please!!!

Yeah!! I can't wait to see how they prove that there is a war. I think it involves Zuko or Iroh. Still can't wait, this is one of my most favorite fanfics!! I was sad when you didn't update for awhile. I think you the one that updates more then the others. See you next time!!

Hi! I'm soooooo glad that you updated this story! I thought that it was dead until you sent me an e-mail! (BTW: I'm "Iamhappyjustbealive") I LOVE this story and hope you update soon!