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for A Dance to Remember

by Arashiwolfprincess

person Unolai
schedule May 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"Organism"? I think you meant something else. =P

And you're probably not aware of this, but you kept changing between past tense and present tense. Pick one and stick to it.
schedule May 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very well written, I give you props for doing something other than the usual pairings. Props to you.
person skoshi4
schedule May 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, it looks like Kimmie finally made it with a nobleman, but oog, those monkey hands and feet!
schedule May 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hokay that's a little weird but just weird enough for me to read. You're way off the reservation with the actual KP storyline. She pretty well entranched with Ron, but this story still worked.