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May 5, 2018 at 12:00 AM
i love this story :) update plz!
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April 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Your story is fucking amazing! Plz keep writing on it. I totally love it! And if you need help imessage me at alex.aligirl.melucci@gmail.com or kik me- alexlarubia I do stories too I would be super happy to see more and to hear from you and to be able to help! Love yah! Keep writing you sexy beast ;)
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May 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i hope shes planning to take a load all over her face, love me a good facial, cant wait for the next chapter
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May 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice end to the chapter, and for some reason I see a strap on in the future.....or maybe not, you decide
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May 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
you can tell just from these chapters your getting better as you go, but just so you know, this is YOUR story not someone elses, you don't have to warn them about anything, put the tags on the story and if people dont want to read that then they can either not read the story or skip that part when it comes to it
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May 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I agree Corsair, The writing improves with each chapter and it still continues to flow. Also getting input from your reader is a good idea, but it is your story, and if you want to get a little crazy with it go for it. I am definately looking forward to the next chapter.
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May 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I would have to say for him to tell alvin he is bi.
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May 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
2 obviously they now have to get it on at some point
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April 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
dude you left us hanging after that, thats horrible but good story so far