Is it ok if I give you an idea for the next chapter
Maybe before before dr.d got his evidence to prove it was ferbs dad that no one including Vanessa will be disgusted by the possibility her dad did or could do something like this instead proud by the fact that he may be an evil genius but he's no rapist, ferbs dad while searching fantasizes what bdsm punishment he will do to her for running or fantasizes about Stacy. Lying naked on the bed with her arms tied behind her back on top of naked Candice with her arms also tied behind her back, there chests pressing against each other as well as their pussys waiting for who's gonna get fucked by ferbs dad as they look at him with pleading fuck me master eyes not caring that he's video recording the whole thing they just care about who's gonna get fucked first but he couldn't decide, so he put one arm above his head with the video camera and angled it to get a full body shot of the two girls on top of each other as well as getting his dick in the shot as he rub his dick in between there pussys. when he came shortly after the girls who are still on top of each other with the back of there heads lying next to each other a few inches apart, Candace's right side of her face was lying rested on the bed while Stacy's left side of her face rested on the bed both girls with facial expressions of exhausted but best fuck ever (eyes rolled back mouth open and tongue out) ferbs dad covered there entire pressed together butts with his spunk then squirt shoted the rest barely covering both the girls seeable sides of their faces as ferbs dad got the whole thing on camera. Ferbs dad was not done yet but they were so instead of continuing with them even though he could if he wanted to instead he called for Isabella and Susie who showed up naked ferbs dad told them to give him a blow job while he recorded their faces looking at the camera then he climaxes on both their faces and in their mouths and then they both were fucked and recorded the same way Candace and Stacy were and same after faces with Isabella being on the bottom because she's bigger. Ferbs dad sat in his chair still not satisfied called for his wife to give him a blowjob as she looks at the camera and as she did ferbs dad said to himself out loud no one can stop me his wife temporarily stopped to say and no one ever will then continued giving him a blowjob then the scene starts to fade as he laughs at how right she is.
Hope you can use this idea
Miscellaneous comments:
--The one particularly gratifying sexual bit was [spoiler] getting molested, given that she's pretty much the most evil character in the P&F universe. (Sorry, Doctor D.)
--The past tense of "lie" (as in to lie down) is "lay," not "lied."
--Doof never just calls his nemesis "Perry"; he always goes out of his way to call him "Perry the Platypus."
--Liked the "garage sale" line.
I'm going to go see if I can borrow the Amnesia-inator. It's a testament to your writing skill that you could put these images in my head, but I really want them out now.
Inumaru12
But I couldn't stop reading.
The way the author made all this sick disgusting stuff so believable, I wonder what the author has been up to.
I am surprised you didn't work The Fireside Girls into your depraved tale. Or will that be Chapter 7?
Some of the pairings were pretty obvious. Some were really unexpected, such as Lawrence using Suzy as a remote control to do stuff to Candace.
Can't wait for Chapter 7!
/end semi-coherent babble
tl;dr YOU MUST FINISH THIS STORY. PLEASE.
patiently I might add......
I particularly want to see what Doofenshmirtz does about Candace.
Please update this soon. ;)