rate_review Reviews

Hey,

I didn't realize when I deleted my account it would delete my reviews as well - sorry.

Again, I really like this story and think you are doing a fantastic job with it. The characters feel like they are right out of the show and the story is very interesting. I hope you will continue this story and I'm honored to know that I am the one who convinced you to keep going with it. Oh well, I think that is everything. Again, great job and keep up the good work!

Very interesting story, I really hope that you finih it soon. Is the video tape that of Jack and Maddie Fenton? I have a felling that it has to do with something so disturbing to Danny that he can't "perform".

Not bad, really like the story. If you want some criticism though, you could stand to proofread a little more as I found a few mispelled or misused words especially in the latest chapter, but that really isn't a big deal. I hope you will continue the story, and I am sure that you will only get better with practice.

I had all but thought this story had been abandoned. What a pleasant surprise to find that is not the case! I really can't wait for the next chapter.

Dude this story kicks ass

Update soon or we're gonna die from suspence!!!

LOVE your story... I just recently found it and I am enjoying it a lot! Please keep up the great work and hope to see more soon!

B-E-A-freakin'-utiful! You definitely write like a pro. But why does it just stop right there?

You definitely need to write more of this!