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November 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome fic! You gotta do chapter 6, maybe with a little more Goo. I really liked the chapter you did with her.
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October 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well done fic, great job. The only thing I didn't like about it was the addition of Goo. IMO, she seemed to disrupt the flow of the story (possibly in more ways than one ;). When I read to the end of Chapter 1 I originally thought "That was a good one-shot. I haven't read a good fic like that in a while". Much to my pleasant surprise there were more chapters. If you're going to keep on with this try to develop Mac and Frankie's relationship with each other with a bit more substance. Of course, don't forget the fun parts afterward. Again, nice work.
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April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
that was a lot of sugar...
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April 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Do I hear a Ch.6?!
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March 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter 4. Still enjoying the fic.
SailorNemesis
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March 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was hawt! Ch.5?!
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March 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
:3 just fucking awesome... I.... just fucking awesome... even with some words missing here and there, even with the age difference and even the physics that you mare, which are absolutely impossible... this is just fucking awesome. please continue this story... take off right from the bedroom that night after ch 4
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March 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
CH.4!4!4!
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March 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, pretty good chapter. Most fics deteriorate when moving to threesomes or moresomes so please do not add anyone else to the mix (and Frankie needs to make it clear to these two not to tell anyone on pain of death). Would still like to see a pregnant Frankie...
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March 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
great new chapter, hooray for facials, always goodd times in my book