rate_review Reviews

I love it, so much. You are a great writer and I love how this relationship has developed. MORE please!

Okay finally caught up again. The only thing that bothers me is that it seems to switch from first person to third person point of view back and forth and tends to get a little confusing to read. Also, the chapter about getting the piercing bothered me a little because of the gun use and the position of the piercings. Shops don't use guns for piercings other than ears and if they're a REAL shop not even for ears at all. Also, where is the lip piercing? The libret is the space between the lower lip and the chin. If you're going for the piercing that's through the lower lip coming out the libret, it's called a vertical libret. Just couldn't tell if you got a libret plus a lip piercing on the side, snake bite style, or if you were just referring to a vertical libret. Sorry I'm picky....I just spend a lot of time in parlors. Other than that I loved the story. I loled hard about the part where CD had to shake Nathan. And I think I'm written well, however you should mention why they think I'm creepy. I figured it's mostly the eyes cuz one is red and one is yellow. love you wifey!