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for Dragon's prey

by ajj77sunhawk

person eve4mem
schedule February 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay no rape! I'm so happy. This chapter was hot and so sweet. It's strange to see Sokka so wounded. He's always had his family's love and now its like he's a shell of his former self. Can't wait to see what happens next.
person InfinitysDaughter
schedule February 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ZOMG! AWESOME CHAPTER!

I have been a total dork and checking every day for an update and I squeeled when I saw chapter 7. X3 Totally hawt and worth the wait. I really loved the part at the beginning. It was really interesting and I cant wait to see where you go with it. ^w^
schedule February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
c7

omg omg omg omg you FINALLY updated!!!!

*sits and reads happily*...*squeals* that was awesome!!!! i was totally entranced by this chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next ^_^
schedule February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i'm so in love with this story, that I've made it a habit to check everyday to see if it's been updated and it makes me sad to find that it hasn't

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
schedule February 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AHH!!!! SUCH. EVIL. TORTURE >< How can you stop right there???!!! I must know what happpens next! I must know just how badly he will react to this lol. Ohhhh please update soon!!!!
schedule February 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*gasps* I'm in love! There aren't enough sexy Zukka stories out there with good plots, so I'm terribly excited to have stumbled upon yours. I really like your Sokka characterization and how you've built up the story so far. I have no requests but that there's love. I'm a sap at heart, so I hope that, no matter how down and dirty the situation gets, there will be love between them in the end. ^^ Keep up the great work, okay? Oh, and if you're still in need of a beta, I'm happy to offer my services. TTFN.
schedule February 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
c6

long, yes
good, oh yes ^_^

please please please tell me c7 is when the smut begins!!!!!
person Anon
schedule February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm just salivating right about now. Again, awesome job.
I loved the interaction between Zuko and Sokka.
They make such a dynamic couple.

Eagerly awaiting the next installment.
~WR

person ray
schedule February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow... I wrote something close to your hallway thing with the hanging stuff, once
only the vines had different small flowers and the path was dark and only lit from tiny lights set in the floor...
are the rooms about levels of trust or something?
are they gonna be all careful about leaving knives with food, too??

Keep it coming!
person eve4mem
schedule February 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I just read it yesterday and already an update! So happy ^_^ It was something. I'm not going to lie I'm a huge Sokka fan so I was cheering for him the whole time. Gotta make Zuko work for him, lol. I'm a little if-ie about this "training period" only because Sokka still doesn't seem to get it or want it. I don't look forward to Sokka getting hurt or worse raped. But I guess I just have to wait and see where this all leads.