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November 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
My stars! I don't think there are enough words to describe how wonderful and well-written I think this story is. Thank you for taking the time and effort to write it. It was so good I read it in one sitting. This story is truly addictive.
I love how you have developed Zuko's and Sokka's characters. I'm glad I am not the only one who sees Sokka as underappreciated. He is definitely self-sacrificing and never was one to take the credit as long as it benefited the whole. And your take on Zuko is terrific. You wrote him as commanding and sensual but at times so achingly vulnerable you don't know whether to kiss him or hug^_^.
Your spirit concept is really unique. The dragon and wolf hawk rock. You do a great job of making their connection to the characters and the spirit world seem seamless. Also,you strike a good balance between angst and sensual. The emotional moments are never overwrought and are believable within the story. The sensual and sexy parts of your story just ooze off the page. Absolutely scrumptious^_*. Beyond that I must say you are positively fiendish to leave that last chapter hanging. I'm bursting with anticipation to find out what's going on with Sokka and what that dying star has to do with his condition. I hope you can put me out of my misery soon:). Looking forward to the next chapter.
I love how you have developed Zuko's and Sokka's characters. I'm glad I am not the only one who sees Sokka as underappreciated. He is definitely self-sacrificing and never was one to take the credit as long as it benefited the whole. And your take on Zuko is terrific. You wrote him as commanding and sensual but at times so achingly vulnerable you don't know whether to kiss him or hug^_^.
Your spirit concept is really unique. The dragon and wolf hawk rock. You do a great job of making their connection to the characters and the spirit world seem seamless. Also,you strike a good balance between angst and sensual. The emotional moments are never overwrought and are believable within the story. The sensual and sexy parts of your story just ooze off the page. Absolutely scrumptious^_*. Beyond that I must say you are positively fiendish to leave that last chapter hanging. I'm bursting with anticipation to find out what's going on with Sokka and what that dying star has to do with his condition. I hope you can put me out of my misery soon:). Looking forward to the next chapter.
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October 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
c19 omg you are SO evil!
please please please update soon!
please please please update soon!
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October 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
sokka got attacked and it bleeding out? :( please please write the reast of it i am Xb dieing to know waht is going on, is sokka pregnent? ;/ that would be weard but cool, or maybe he was trying to medatat and did something like got lost in the spirit world, :[ please don't kill sokka that would be so wrong, Zuko needs a good ending please!!! alokcin, thats me, is begging :(< you to be kind to the poor beta upon Zuko and let him have a happy ending....:O o', did soka invit that lady in the room and their having nap time together :D. By the way way cool story best i have read in a long time ***** 5stars give you six if you finish it!
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October 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I er wa but GAHAHAHA!!! You ish a not nice person. ;^;
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September 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
O.O SOKKA!!!! Just please please PLEASE don't kill him!!!! anything but that! or killing zuko!!!! PLEASE! *gets one knees* you have no idea how many times my favorite characters die in books or shows.... PLEASE DON'T!!! *deep breath* okay, now that I've had my initial panic attack it was a very good chapter! I love your writing. Yeah, I didn't see the heir thing going well this soon into the relationship. Glad they seemed to get through it though. can't wait to read more!
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August 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
um...is it like- the star is a new soul and it's supposed to be sokka and zuko's child but it doesn't have a way to born yet, like M-Preg, so the spirits care for it till something happens to Sokka (maybe through the ceramony) ??
or maybe it was supposed to be Katara and Aang's baby but now she's over stressed or sick and that's threatening it's life so it needs help from Sokka's spirit (uncle) ??
or maybe it was supposed to be Katara and Aang's baby but now she's over stressed or sick and that's threatening it's life so it needs help from Sokka's spirit (uncle) ??
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August 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hmmmmmmmm interesting! I'm really curious as to what the 'star' is! can't wait to find out!
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August 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
INdeed, the Katara and AAng cameos were sufficient. Thank you for updating once more, please do so again when you have the time.
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August 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! I have been desperately waiting for an update. I'm out of work on medical leave right now for almost and entire month and I'm bored to pieces. This update is wonderful and besides the mistakes (that were pointed out in the disclaimer section) I loved the entire chapter. As always I can't wait to read more!
Ja ne
Kireania
Ja ne
Kireania
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July 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm SOOOOOOOO sorry I haven't reviewed lately RL has been hell. But I just caught up on everything I missed and I have to say that I'm am thoroughly addicted to this story and I wish there was a way that updates could happen...like...every second??? That's totally doable right? *cough cough refused to think of own stories that haven't been updated in a year or so cough cough* Yea every second is totally possible lol.
Anyway thanks again for the great read!!!
Ja ne
Kireania
PS: I am totally hyped up on sugar right now so please forgive the total randomness of this review ^_^
Anyway thanks again for the great read!!!
Ja ne
Kireania
PS: I am totally hyped up on sugar right now so please forgive the total randomness of this review ^_^